hmmmm. . . .
Sadly, that was kind of good. But you have to have a lot of patience. However, you spelled four things wrong in the flash. It's not that you can go and fix them, it's just me wanting to let you know. You spelled exited wrong (exitted), you spelled repetitive wrong (repetive), thing was spelled wrong (I'm positive that it was a typo), and completely was spelled wrong. Well, practice and you will definitely get better.